A second 'great' poem after the first one
A follow-up to the first poem...
This one is one of my personal best and fave!
This is the longest poem I've ever written...
with TWELVE stanzas...
Five syllabuses in each line...
a nice rhyming scheme of a-a-b-c, d-d-e-f, g-g-h-i and so on...
Do tell me your comment on it.
DISTANT, YET, CLOSER
Shocked, flabbergasted,
Angered, frustrated,
Emotions I felt,
When I knew at last.
Watching silently,
Hidden secretly,
Like in a movie;
In a cheerless scene.
For one brief moment,
It felt like torment;
How I felt so downed,
Blinded by green eyes.
Hurt so much it did,
This I dare to bid,
Seeing the one loved
To love another.
But that was all it,
When noticed a bit,
A pleasant aura,
Like a radiant cape.
Smiled I did really,
Can’t help it truly,
To be happy, glad,
For your happiness.
You are a great friend,
Wish it’ll never end,
Our friendship that is,
For you’re an angel.
Despite the upset,
I can bravely bet,
It will only last,
For a while no doubt.
For now I can say,
Onwards from this day,
I promise you this,
My sister you’ll be.
For some time before,
You regard me for,
A little brother,
Like your very own.
And to you I vow,
To him I won’t bow,
If for any time,
He may mistreat you.
Defend you I will,
On my own free will,
For I care for you,
Like a brother should.
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